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c/email-template-swapkai839kai8394d agoProlific Poster

Hit 500 cold emails sent and only 3 replies - what am I missing?

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blake_kelly19
blake_kelly194d agoMost Upvoted
Stop overthinking the subject lines and starting with "Hey [Name]" fluff. Your first sentence needs to call out a specific pain point they actually have, not just say you can help them grow. Keep each email under 100 words and end with a low friction question like "Is this something you're dealing with right now?" Personalize the first line with something real about their recent LinkedIn post or a blog they wrote, not just their company name. Also test different times of day, I got way more replies sending between 8-10am their local time vs right at 9 when everyone's inbox is flooded.
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the_faith
the_faith4d ago
Stop overthinking the subject lines" - maybe your offer just sucks.
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the_john
the_john4d ago
Keep your first email under 80 words and skip the intro paragraph entirely. Blunt works better than polite in cold outreach from my experience. End with a yes/no question like "Want me to send over a few examples?
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